Sunday, March 29, 2009

Plan for the Exploration

Essay Plan
Introduction: Is exploration negative or positive for a country? This is really a hard to answer,because all the experiences have advantages and disadvantages. A country's exploration to different places in the world is important although sometimes something unpredictable happens.
Thesis Statement: Anyway the exploration can develop the area ,the resources and culture to the country.
Body Paragraph 1Topic Sentence: Exploration can increase the area of the country that make the country be stronger.
Body: Describes why exploration can increase the area of the country and the importance of the area that can be increased.
Concluding Sentence: Therefore,the exploration can help the country develop.
Body Paragraph 2Topic Sentence: In other hand the exploration can bring more resources to that country.
Body: What resources that will be find to the country and how the resources help the country. How are they be useful?How are they good for people?
Concluding Sentence:All in all,the resources make both the people and the country be shine.
Body Paragraph 3Topic Sentence:An added thought,the exploration can take more knowledge to the country.
Body: What knowledge will be taking to the country ? Why are they important to the country? How are they help both people and the country?
Concluding Sentence:In summary the knowledge help the country grow up and develop.
Exploration is important for countries
In the past,so many people in this world used their lifetime to explore because they wanted to have an unusual life. During the exploration many people died. The exploration brings some goods to a country,but also brings some catastrophes. Is exploration negative or positive for a country? This is really difficult to answer,because all the experiences have advantages and disadvantages. A country's exploration to different places in the world is important although sometimes unpredictable events happens. Exploration is important to the country because it can enlarge territories and bring plentiful resources. However it can also cause some side effects such as war that bring lots of damage for countries along with all the other advantages.
Exploration can develop the territories of the country. It helps the country be powerful. People find more lands during the exploration that make the country bigger. If the territory can be enlarged, it means this country can be puissant. If the territory of a country is very small,it's easy to cause disasters. For instance,many people have no house to live and no space to relax . Follow the weather changes some people died. The reason of the disaster is the population changes all the time but the area of the country is changeless. On the other hand,the dimensions of domain also represent the droit. Thus,exploration is really important to a country.
Abundant resources can make the country wealthy and powerful and the exploration can bring
plentiful resources to a country. Therefore exploration is important to a country. As the history shows many resources was found during the exploration of someone. Explorer can find more oil ,gas,gold... during the exploration. All of those goods can bring benefits to a country,like make the people richer. The country can use those things to exploit,experiment and educate talent people. Talent people can help the country better and better because they can create more resources rather than to explore. Resources can help both people and country,actually they have a connection. Resources help the people to experience more and create more that make the country valuable. Consequently exploration is a indispensability part of a country.
Every event has both aspects,pros and cons. Like the exploration not only can develop country but also can cause the conflict between two different countries that bring lots of harm. No one would like to let others to share the house that they live,so when the strangers come to your own family and want to take your stuff you must feel very angry. Country is like the family in local people's heart so they don't be willing to lose everything that in their family. When aliens come, the local people always think of they want to breach their family. They try their best to have fight with the alien. When the explore find some goods in another country they always want to have a trade with the local people but not all the people like to have a trade with them so this also can cause the clash. Like the Donnacona doesn't want to have trades with Cartier,so the Cartier kidnapped his son. Therefore,exploration can cause damage.
Exploration is important to the country because it can enlarge territories and bring plentiful resources. However it can also cause some side effects such as war that bring lots of damage for countries along with all the other advantages. No exploration means no improve,no improve that the country can't develop. If the country not be developed the level of a country can't be raised,either. The exploration indirect proportion to the development. Exploration do more good than harm that develop the country and make the people happy although sometimes bad happened. Exploration is really important to a country!

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