Exploration can create conflict and misunderstanding.
Plan(story)
Introduction
Topic sentence: In the past, a group of people in Canada wanted to explore because they want to have an unusual life and they wanted to develop their country.
Thesis statement: Everything was unexpected to them they encountered lots of problems,like they can't speak foreign language,they were unwelcoming to the local people and they caused some troubles.
Rising Action
Topic sentence: They arrived at France and they wanted to ask someone about France. Unfortunately when the French started talking they felt confused because they couldn't understand what did they say.
Concluding sentence: Different language is a major obstacle to communicate.
Climax
Topic sentence: While they were walking,many local people discussed about them and they didn't want Canadian people came.
Concluding sentence:Exploration can cause conflict that make people felt terrible.
Concluding sentence:Exploration can cause conflict that make people felt terrible.
Falling Action
Topic sentence: A canadian man barged against the French man, Unfortunately,both of them have bile.
Concluding sentence:Therefore the exploration can creat misconception between different countries.
Concluding sentence:Therefore the exploration can creat misconception between different countries.
Resolution
The Canadian people brought complaint and despair left.
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