- moving and flowing is the example of rhyme because it can reveal the movement of the river.I use these words to describe the movement of the river because its can give a good and true image of river to the readers. Its also makes the reader easy to read.
- like the silk is the example of simile,the river in this picture looks very clean and beautiful like the silk.Silk looks very soft like the river,so I use silk to describe river. Silks are very valuable in China,so it reveals how valuable the river of Canada it is. A small thing can have a intense influence.
- brandish is the example of personification because river is not a person so it can't dance. I use this example because I want to the readers can have another image of river when they read my poem. This word also can reveal the active of the river and how it makes the land of Canada looks charming and cause a good image in people's eyes.
- overlook at the land lovely and hopeful is the example of alliteration.It reveals the love of Canadians to the lands.Lovely is a soft sound that makes reader feel sweet.
- like the mother's eyes watching the whole land is the example of hyperbole.The eyes of a mother can't be huge.Sky is immense. The reason I use mother's eyes because I want to readers know sky represent the people in Canadian.Mother's eyes are symbolise all the people in Canada.Because of their care of the land ,the Canadian land become beautiful and charming.
2. Using 12-15 sentences, explain the insightful and mature meaning of your poem.THINK DEEP AND THINK DEEPER!
My poem is about Canadian landscape which reveal the patriotism of Canadians. This poem shows the nice environment of Canada. The words that I used reveals the morbidezza of Canadian landscape. I used the beauty of sky to admire Canadians' hard working and their duty to take careful care of nature. Canadian landscape like the firm mountain that give the safety to the Canadians.It makes people have a comfortable space to have relax and enjoy themselves. A select landscape can provide a nice eye shot to people. Silks are very valuable in China,so it shows the rarity of Canadian landscape. The word"smiling" reveals the magic of Canadian landscape which can make people feel happy. The reason I used some colours to describe the landscape because I want to make the reader have a different feeling of landscape. Fresh colour can make people feel happy and excited. Canadian landscape is relaxing for people to nestle and listen the music of the nature. I want the poem to make the readers have a relaxing spirit of their life.
3. What is your poem about?
My poem describes the different scenery of Canadian landscape. It also reveals the human emotion of the landscape like the love of nature or the pride of Canadians.
4. How do you represent the Canadian landscape in your poem? Use 3-5 sentences.
As people know Canada has a really special environment that other countries do not have. Many people who have illness they come to Canada to convalesce so it demonstrates the magic of Canadian landscape. All the plants I wrote in the poem are very familiar but different. Canadian landscape looks more mellow and heartfelt.
5. Imagine you are an explorer and sent this poem to your King or Queen, how would they feel about the Canadian landscape?
They will Dreamlike but yearning.I want to my poem can make the people not only think of the landscape but also think of the emotion of nature. They feel the amazement because of the beauty of Canadian landscape. The different colour can make the readers have in mind
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